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Review:redherring says:
I really love this! Drastoria is one of my absolute favourite ships but I really like how this isn't just a story about their relationship, it's also about life for the Slytherins after the war. That was all portrayed very believably and realistically, I thought. I really enjoyed your characterisation of both Draco and Astoria, and Pansy as well, in fact.

Your writing is fantastic, plain and simple. An absolute pleasure to read, and it all feels so natural as well. I absolutely loved this part, and it's a rather eccentrically long quote to put in but I simply had to include it to show you how much I appreciate its genius: 'I work in the Muggle Liason Office (Draco mentally filed her under the 'weird' category in his mind) and even though it’s really interesting, (he filed her under the 'severely deluded' sub-division) all the overtime I do (he now placed her into the 'avoid at all costs' folder) means that I don't get to see people often.'

I loved how some parts of this chapter, like that, were just so funny and brilliant, and then others were full of simply beautiful description, like those opening few paragraphs about the weather. It really shows you can do anything, and do it pretty-darn-fabulously xD Favourited!

Author's Response: Me too! It's my OTP, not going to lie. Half the stuff I write is Drastoria-centric. I love trying to figure out the whole post-Hogwarts Death Eater/general Slytherin thing too; it's another common story idea I use. Anyway, glad you liked it (:

No quote is eccentricly long :') Yes, I was trying to think how I could portray Draco as thinking of her as weird without saying '"She's weird" Draco thought ponderously' or something.

Anyway, thank you very much! Very glad you liked it :)

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