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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Hey there! Here for the review battle. :)

A friend of mine got me recently into Dramiones so I thought that this prologue was a good place to start for when I read the complete story. :)

I quite like your characterisation of Draco. I always like to think that all those horrors he had lived through had managed to change and soften his view of the world. I think your descriptions of the emotions he goes through are perfect! :) As for Lucius and Narcissa they are also well done - the loving mother and the stern father who cannot quite yet let go of the beliefs he had carried his whole life.

I particularly liked your idea how the Malfoys tried to distance themselves from the wizarding world. A lot of writers forget the consequences that being a former Death Eater would be and I am glad that you mentioned it. I think it's more realistic this way. Your writing is very good, too. It's engaging and definitely makes me want to read the whole story. And when I have more time, I certainly will. Well done! :)

Best,
Harley

Author's Response: Hi. Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you like my characterisation of Draco. I wanted to believe that he was changing in the last book and that is what I tried to capture in this story. He had a hard life, growing up in Lucius' shadow and this is his journey to be someone other than Lucius' son, .

I'm really happy you enjoyed it and I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint.

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