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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Hey there! I am finally here with reviews for my challenge. RL, you annoying horrible thing!

Anyway. I adore this story. Let me say this with a few points.
Characterisation - I think that both Ted and Andromeda are spot on considering what we know about them. Ted - the gentle muggleborn who has a playful streak in his character that allows him to catch the attention of a pureblood. Andromeda - the other "out of place" Black, who nevertheless possesses some snarky traits of a Slytherin. I like their subtle descriptions throughout the story very much.

Plot - considering also your Remus/Sirius story, I think you have a great talent at describing a secret kind of forbidden romance. Their subtle, kind of hushed yet bubbling passionately below the surface romance during their Hogwarts time is perfect.

Finally - the quote. I really liked how you used it and how Andromeda retorted to it sarcastically. Truly in the tone of House. Well done!

As a whole, a great great story. First Ted/Andromeda to go in my favourites! :))

Best,
Maya

Author's Response: I hate when RL gets in the way of fanfiction. :( Keeps me from reading as well. *shakes fist*

So so so glad that you like the way I painted the characters. Their characterization scared me since we didn't know much about them. :D

Ah forbidden and hidden is the most entertaining of all romance. Lol. Thank you again!!

*blushes* You're too kind, thank you! --Jenna


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