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Review:MiihLady says:
Alrighty finished with whats here so far! :)
Firstly I Wanst exactly motivated to read further, Cuz the Plot did Not Appeal to me much. But I read the First chapter and was caught by your writing style! Its really entertaining.!
So now Ive finished the 13 Chapters there are so far.
And Im really Looking forward to Reading more.!
Don't Stress yourself, but I sure am hungry for more :)
Even the Way the Plot developped I liked, well like.!
It is packed with clichees but oh well :
Im espacially looking forward to the Adele/Fred Part and when Shivani eventually Meets with her Mum again :)

If you ever get bored, Id like a Sirius Fanfic :) with your style, that sure would Be Great.!

Keep up the Good Work.! :D

Author's Response: hey! first off, so sorry for this embarrassingly late response. anywho:

i'm glad you continued reading, despite not being interested at first. that means a lot to me that you gave it a try. :)

i actually don't think i'll have time in this story to write about her eventually talking to her mom, though that would be interesting...

thanks again for reading and reviewing! expect updates in a little more than a month. :)

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