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Review:datbenik513 says:
Helena! This was an amazing debut about an equally amazing character. I think Neville has gone through the greatest metamorphosis from all canon characters. Even Harry hasn't developed that much through the years.

This was also a very daring attempt to use 1st person Present Tense POV. It's extremely tricky. Either you screw it up or make a gem of it; you have forged the Koh-i-Noor. I enjoyed every single word of it and didn't want your story to end at all.

Another reviewer has already pointed it out, but I can't seem to see past it: the exquisitely rich language you write.

Simply A-WE-SOME. Full stop. More of this, please. 10/10

And, if you allow me a bit of shameless self-plug, you might want to read my own Neville one-shot, What We Believe In, that starts from his promise: "Next time you see me, I’ll have done something to make you proud."

Zoltan
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Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for the amazing review, it honestly made me grin like mad. I completely agree with you, which is why Neville is one of my favourite characters, which is why it is even more awesome that you enjoyed my one-shot about him.
The fact that you didn't want it to end is some of the highest praise I've ever been given. I really really appreciate this review, not just because it's positive, but it's lovely that you took the time to share your thoughts.
I will check out your Neville one-shot asap! Like I said, he's a personal favourite.

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