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Review:justonemorefic says:
OH my god that was the most adorable thing ever. I love fics featuring children. Something about the innocence of them in a time of war makes their stories so poignant. It really captures their childhood moments back before everyone grows up and hates each other and becomes jealous and all that mess.

Ahh the whole ceremony was too cute. The wonder at the brooch, Sev's fascination with Muggle toy machines. Hahah, I completely understand the feeling from when I was a kid. I always wanted them, but my mom wouldn't let me. The pregnant by kiss thing. And then Sev kissing her on the forehead >_< Adorable.

Breaks my heart at the end :( Ahh, poor Sev, poor Lily. I like how you ended it with her waking up as an adult to that. Wraps it all up, I think. Good work :)

Author's Response: Hello there!

Thanks for the review...this was so much fun to write. Getting in the minds of children...ahhh. It really takes one back to one's own days on the playground.

And of course the concept that children say the darndest things :)

It is a sad ending, a sad ending in that it realistically happens far too often in this world. I think it tugs at our heart string even more that we know its Lily and Sev...we feel like we know them!

Thanks for the lovely review!
-schoenemaedchen

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