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Review:Ellerina says:
I READ THIS BEFORE. I REMEMBER. I WAS ALL TEDDY YOU JERK. VICTOIRE IS JUST. JUST. UGH.

That said, I love this for a lot of reasons. First because I can see where you first started to go down the dark!Teddy path, that ended with TAFD, which is awesome. I can also see how you were working on your descriptive writing and this is really beautiful! But I can definitely see where you were going and how you ended up at the sheer beauty that is your Luna story.

It makes me laugh and laugh and laugh that our Teddy/Molly stories are so similar, with the weddings and Victoire, but somehow they are really different as well.

I think my favorite line is definitely one near the end: "...it will be nearly impossible to hide the gaping, red wound where her heart once pumped." It's so vivid and painful sounding. I love it.

xoxoxo
Annie

Author's Response: Anie. I loves you.

I hadn't even thought of this as the beginning of the dark Teddy path, since the two stories are so stylistically different. But that's a great point!! They are both so cunning and deceiving and maniacal. I have always had a tendency to slip into discription... sometimes I literally have to review things I've written to make sure something actually happens or is said, because I can write description for eons.

They are so similar. I love it. Like two different angles on the same issue. Only, I feel like your Molly is more whole than mine if that makes sense.

-xx-


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