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Review:BrightStar says:
Umm... I'm sad now, and may need to eat some chocolate... which translates to great job in conveying the emotions! Your writing style is really easy to read, and you dealt well with the lyrics - sometimes they make the whole thing incoherent, but that wasn't the case here at all.

The only problem I had was that I would have liked a little more character background, and a little on their relationship and why it ended. However, I still really like this story, I'm glad I read it :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing :)

I'm glad I managed to get those emotions across to you and that you liked it.

I did consider putting a little bit of information about their relationship but I decided I wanted to keep it short and sweet and a little bit vague :P

Thanks again,

Sophia x


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