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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Um. I would just like to ask WHY this story has no reviews... Because it makes no sense to me whatsoever. And I can only hide my head in shame because I didn't make my way over here sooner!

I loved this story - you had a great characterization of Regulus, who is admittedly coming into more and more stories but not enough to satisfy my curiosity for more stories about him. I loved the beginning scene in Grimmauld Place, and I thought you NAILED all the Blacks' characterizations. Especially teenage-rebel Sirius. ^^

This may sound a little weird (but you know me decently enough by now!) but my absolute favorite part of this whole story was where you described the vibrations and malfunctions of Sirius's door. It was just two sentences, yes - but minor details like that impress the HECK out of me. That's what makes a story real, and vivid, and I've never seen someone do that before on a story here. I cannot even begin to tell you how much that impressed me. =]

No critiques - you need to write less amazing stories, because I sound all soft and mellow when I never have any suggestions for you! ^^ I truly loved this story, and will go and submit a story recommendation for it on the forums, because it definitely deserves a heck of a lot of attention. ^^ Fantastic job!

Author's Response: I saw that on the recommendation page, and my jaw dropped.

:O

So I quickly scampered over here. And you know what? I'm posting this in 'reviews that made my day'. Because it DID. You have no idea how encouraging this is... I hadn't gotten any reviews for it. I know, it's just a one-shot and one-shots tend to not get much attention unless you request reviews. But if no one reviewed me, then I would never know if it was crap or not! And if it was crap, I wanted critique to see how to make it NOT crap.

I don't think it's weird at all that your favorite part was about Sirius's door. I liked that bit, too. ^_^ When I write I kind of glaze my eyes over and try to get into the main character's head as much as possible. I look all around myself and imagine what I would see, what I would hear, what I would smell. I am SO flattered that you liked it enough to recommend it. That's quite an honor, coming from you, since you're such an amazing writer. Seriously, your Insomniac story blew my mind. It's just...wow. It really stands out in my mind as one of the best one-shots I've ever read.

Thank you so much for reviewing this for me. :) Much love!


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