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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Toujours Padfoot from the forums here for your review. :)

Whoa-ness. FANTASTIC first chapter. You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through, wanting to know more about him, wanting to know what he was doing and where he was going. And your way of ending the chapter is sure to leave everyone wanting more. I really want to know if Claire's alright. I already care for your characters - and I can feel their emotions very well. Extremely well done.

The only thing that could be improved are a few typos I found. They aren't much, and they aren't really distracting or anything, but I ought to point them out anyway since I'm supposed to be giving CC. ^_^

He could push through the last mile. He had too.

(to instead of too)

How much could they tell about him based that or the way he ran?

(based on that)

That's about it. I really liked reading this. It is just oozing with suspense. :)

~ Toujours Padfoot

Author's Response: Hello again Toujours Padfoot (creative name!) :)

*Beams* thank you! I'm glad the suspense resonated with you and that you want to know what's going on haha. YAY for caring! I always feel attached to my characters...because they are mine...so it's nice to see that you feel something for them too :)

And thank you for pointing out those typos; I'll be sure to correct them whenever I get the chance! I really appreciate this review, thanks again.

Best,
nrb


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