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Review:The Captain says:
I generally avoid reading stories set in other countries, or with foreign exchange students because they're normally full of cliches. Your story is certainly not one of those. While the wizarding laws and culture are still the same, you've drifted far enough from Harry's world that your story is totally unique. I'm a history nerd, but I don't know that much about Korea, so I found this very enlightening. I'm not sure if I can quite believe that the twins' parents were so out of touch with the Muggle world that they didn't understand why the twins had to use their Japanese names, however. Even if they are wizards, I think that wars and foreign occupations would be large enough events that they would affect wizards as well as Muggles.
You also had some lines that should have been written negatively, but were not, such as "They were even very good at being Muggle Koreans." and "Over the years, Mi-cha lost touch with her parents- they could very well come calling now that their daughter had a Muggle husband and was raising Muggle children-not that this really felt like much of a tragedy in her eyes." I'm assuming you meant to say that the twins weren't very good at being Muggle Koreans, since they didn't quite fit in.

Author's Response: Yeah, I need to go over this story with another beta to get rid of the typos. As far as the isolation from what was happening with the Japanese later. Remember, there was a war going on with Voldemort and Muggles didn't know a thing about it.

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