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Review:BellaFan202 says:
As for the chapter::review thing, that's fine. I actually haven't been keeping track of that lately. I just like reviewing more since I put that rule up. Plus, I'm pretty stinking lazy. :)

Now to the review! :)
-You know, for the ‘boy-who-lived’, you do like to flirt with death sometimes ('boy-who-lived' should be capitalized as it's his 'title'.)
-So Lily-pad, what’ll it be tonight?” ('Pad' shoud be capitazed, as it's part of her nickname.)
+ Yeah, okay, so Lily is stinking adorable! I love how she can manipulate Harry into telling her stories, and that she called the Basilisk and Basilock.
+The king suggested that they might want to... bake a cake together, one day.” (That was so funny! I love that metaphor. Very clever. (: )
+When you say "evil bug" I assume you mean Rita Skeeter? That's really funny too. :)

So really, those were the only two negative things about this, and that won't take long to fix. Other than those, the story was perfect, although it would have been awesome if the 'wisest witch's' boyfriend/fiance/husband had been in the story, at least a little. But I may or may not just be saying that because he's my favorite. :)

(LiveLaughLoveHarryPotter on the forums)

Author's Response: Hiya! Thanks so much for choosing to do this - I've had more reviews than I expected, but I hadn't had much con-crit, so your review was still much needed!

Ah, capitalisations - really should know better, but somehow both of these got past me! Will go edit immediately (ah, the joy of TA status, meaning that I won't be filling the queue!)

As for the positives, I'm so glad you liked it! I was searching for a while for a good euphemism for Rita Skeeter, so I'm glad you got it. And I'm so glad you liked Lily - I wasn't sure if she was cute or irritating, but I was aiming for the former, so YAY!

Sorry for the absence of Ron - originally he was in the story at two separate points, but he just kept writing himself out of it. Basically, because I couldn't imagine him talking to Harry about baking with Ginny!

Thanks so much for the comprehensive and encouraging review!

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