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Review:TheProphecy says:
Hey!

Well, I've just read this and i thought it was really really really good :D

I loved the "Cakes", i thought that was brilliant. It was amusing, funny and really lovely. Unfortunately my mind is on a blank so i can't say anything remotely intelligent about this :D

But i loved the story idea, I loved the characterisation of Lily, Harry and Ginny throughout. I thought it was well written, no grammar mistakes I could see and overall it was really sweet. :)

As far as I can see it met all the criteria and you've really set the bar high for the rest of them. :)

Well done. I'll Pm everyone when I've announced the winners :D So don't forget to check :D

Well done again..you've made me all happy just reading your story :)

(I'm a bit short on time right now so i might come back and review it properly, so any concerns about it just tell me and i'll come back to it :D)

TheProphecy x

Author's Response: Awww! I'm so glad you liked it! I've been playing with the idea of having a parent tell a story for a while now, and so when this came up it was too good to resist! I've always wanted to explore the concept of telling a story with an obvious bias, and this seemed like the ideal opportunity to try it - so I'm glad the euphemisms were indeed funny rather than irritating! And yeah, I think I still have cupcakes on the brain from April - it's a sickness.

Thanks for coming up with such a fun challenge!


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