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Review:Pheonixfire73 says:
Wow, What a riveting, emotion laden and heartfelt story. I loved so much about it I hardly know where to begin. The only things that I would say that I found are a few grammar errors for instance you use the word meet where I think met is the word that should have been used, and a few left out words here and there, but who of us had not done that, right? Guilty of that myself, so far be it from me to judge you on that, just thought you might like to know in case you wanted to you wanted to read over it and correct these. Ok, back on the good. I like how you integrated the romantic interest between Charity and Fil, it flowed well, in fact the whole story seemed to flow well until I reached the letter, at parts it seemed a bit repetitive, but I believe you used that to get the emotion and urgency of her message across. All in all I really liked it a lot, and am looking forward to more chapters. Good Job !!!

Author's Response: I have a really bad habit of rushing ahead of my thoughts and forgetting to fill in the gaps. I'll have to go in and edit it. Charity and Filius just kind of got together on their own. It seemed so right that I just let them get on with it. ;D Thanks so much for looking this over. I already have some ideas on how to tighten things up. :)

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