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Review:firefly910 says:
Hello Jane, Callie here with your review :)

That was so intense!
I remember reading this when you were panicking about it being to dark but honestly the mood of this story is perfect.

Your writing is brilliant! As I was reading it I kept thinking how elegant it felt. It flowed excellently.

You captured the emotions of all the characters really well.
I could feel how Antonin felt, the guilt, the remorse. The parts that were set in the present were just so brilliant. You didn't make him appear to pitiful. By adding in the part about him still enjoying torturing people it reminded me that he is still a Death Eater, he just thinks it may have gone to far.

It's almost a reluctant sympathy that your writing initiates which I think (hope) is what you were aiming for.

I don't have any criticism at all for this. I loved it!
Definitely going in my favourites :)

10/10! I hope it does well in the challenge.

Author's Response: I do remember now that I asked you to look over this story! Hehe, well thanks for coming back to look at it anyway. ^^

I love that you think my writing is elegant - elegance is one of the things I admire most in writing, so that you think I have some is extremely flattering. =]

You're so incredibly sweet, Callie! *hug* Thanks for being such an incredible awesome friend. =] I'll keep you posted on the challenge results! xoxoxo


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