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Review:PrincessPadfoot says:

*internal monologue*

Harryís dying. What? NO!!! No Harry canít die!!!

Well no really he canít heís in the sequel.

But things arenít looking pretty, heís spitting up blood and there are voices in his head.

Well there are voices in your head and you arenít dying.

Too true!! Okay letís keep reading.

Hehehe Ron and his pie :P Heís always hungry!! The link!!! Itís back haha I had almost forgotten about Ginny and Harryís happy special alone time in their heads. I wonder how that will come into play in this story. HmmmÖ

Harry and the boys are going to gamble!!! Woot!!! Well Harry might notÖbut eh maybe heíll change his mind. Whereís the fun in NOT taking chances?!?!

Hermione!!! Oh Iím so happy for her!! Iím glad you wrote this scene because when I was reading Crusade I had been wondering how Hermione got her position.



Lovely chapter as always!! Iím excited to find out what happenes next!!!

Ta ta!!

P.S. I wrote this review as I was reading so my freakouts should be in order :P

Author's Response: And thank you for ordering your freakouts. LOL!

Really thrilled to have you reviewing Pitch, and this was a great one.

I wrote this to fill in the back story from Crusade a bit. I wanted to justify how and why Hermione, Ron and Harry were so highly placed in the Ministry at such a young age. This gets addressed more throughout, but Hermione's back story here I thought was key. I'm glad you think it works.

Odd though. The Battle of the Pitch was originally just a plot device in Crusade, a way to justify why the girls were as well trained as Aurors. Now it's its own story. I had great fun writing it and I'm really pleased your enjoying it.

Harry dying? But he's in the sequel...or is it a sequel? Keep in mind, those portions that address Harry stumbling down the road take place two years AFTER Crusade. The parts in between take place two years before Crusade. So, anything's possible.



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