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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Hey! So sorry for the terrible delay in this reviews. :( Anyways, here I go. Since I already told you about spelling mistakes, let me talk about a few more things here.

I really like Charlotte. Up to now she seems like a wonderful well-rounded character. :)

The plot is also entertaining and keeps the reader interested. On the downside, I think that a problem you may run into is cliches. You kind of use a lot of them in this chapter - Sirius being paired with the OC, the nasty girl in the girls dormitory. While this is not bad per se, I think it would be good to try to stay away from using a lot of them in order to distinguish your story from the others. :)

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