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Review:rozen_maiden says:
Hey, it's Mahalia (:
First comment is, that there was barely any dialogue, yet it still help my attention. There was so much description that was so well written, that it really left me quite breathless. I couldn't have torn my eyes away even if i tried! I don't know what it was about your writing, but it was truly amazing!
I've always been really interested in Dolohov, but have never found any stories on him, so I really enjoyed this. You kept him a death eater, yet also kept him afraid - it was a good contrast. I have always really enjoyed reading stories on Death Eaters and seeing how people view them - if they give them human emotions, or leave them monsters. This was truly surprising and nice, because though i've been interested in Dolohov, I have always seen him as quite a horrible person.
Finally, the last line was abolsutely magical! It finalised Dolohov's feelings throughout the story, and it really left me breathless! I even felt sick in my stomach for him!
Congrats on the story, and good luck in the challenge. It's going to be really hard for me to compete now :S haha. Thanks for the amazing read!
Mahalia x

Author's Response: *jumps up and down like a giddy child* Someone feels sick for him, that was my goal! Ohhh, you have just made my week, along with a happy little tear in my eye. ^^

For some reason, I tried to write some more dialogue in this story... and it didn't fit at all. So that explains the lack of it, hehe!

Dolohov has just fascinated me since writing this piece, and I kind of want to write more about him... I'll have to find out what, though. ^^ Thank you so very, very, very much (as always) and I'll be sure to watch for your own challenge piece!!! xoxoxo

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