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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
You are such an amazing writer!! Even though this is the first really dark piece you've done, you've pulled it off very well. The thought and description you put into your writing is admirable. (I may have said something similar in my last review. If so, sorry but it's true!) The more I read, the more I become involved with the situation. It's so detailed and I can picture his surroundings.

I love the descriptions such as: 'clasping his pounding temples beneath his sinewy, trembling fingers'. I think the comparison between the Death Eaters cloaks and a snake is an excellent one :)

I'm glad we get to see this other side to Antonin. He's not a character who is written often and to see this not-so-dark side of him is refreshing.

I don't have any criticisms at all. It's absolutely brilliant!!

Sophia xx ^_^

P.S. despite taking absolutely ages to write this, I'm the first review!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!! I'm glad to hear I pulled off the dark piece well - I was a little worried, I'm not used to writing dark things (although I love reading them). But this piece was an absolute thrill to write, and I worked on it almost obsessively. ^^

Antonin's become a very fascinating character to me through the course of this piece, and I loved getting inside his head, why he did what he did.

Thanks as always, Sophia, you're amazing. xoxo

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