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Review:firefly910 says:
Hi, Firefly910 here from the forums :)

I really enjoyed this chapter, I love Wendy's character.
She's very realistic and all of the background information you shared about her Gramps and classical music grounded her in the story.

Your writing is really good. The story flowed and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes. I love the description of the type of job Wendy's dad wanted her to get. It's spot on, that's how I guess most people feel about boring 9-5 jobs.

The end of the story was very tense, poor Wendy doesn't have a clue what's going on. Something serious must have happened if Lily is showing her magic!

To be honest I didn't really find anything wrong with the chapter, it's really good and has made really excited to read the next one!

Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: I'm very glad you were satisfied that Wendy seemed like she belonged. I've really been working to make her fit with them.

Something serious did happen. The war may be making an early appearance! Again, I'm so pleased that you liked it.

Thank you for your thoughtful review.

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