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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hello! This is TenthWeasleyWriter from the forums with your requested review! (I've decided to read all six chapters for you, because I had the time. ^^)

Overall, I quite enjoyed this story. Your OC Wendy is very unique (she reminds me rather a lot of a Joan Jett-esque person!) and I think you've written her personality very well. I've never read an OC quite like her, not your average HP OC at all! ^^

Your writing style is also quite nice, and very easy to read, which I like. I do agree with some of your other readers when they say some chapters seem to be more 'filler' chapters than others. That's not necessarily a bad thing, and I know the struggles of writing those 'filler' moments well from my own novella, so no worries, hun! Every chapter can't be action-packed. ^^

I really like your plot, too, and I can't wait to see where it leads. You have a very nice control over all the characters you've written here, and it will be interesting to see where you take him.

Thanks for coming by and requesting a review, I hope it was satisfying enough for you. ^^ Hope to see you around on the forums!

Author's Response: First, thank you for taking the time to do that! I really appreciate it!

I'm very glad that you liked Wendy. I've tried very hard to make her both believable and unique. But I think the concept of the character was a little out there to begin with.

I'm glad you understand the filler-ness. It just needed to happen. I guess I was just nervous because there were two filler-type chapters right next to each other.

Thank you so much for your comments! They are very much appreciated!


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