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Review:annaawakening says:
Wow! This was so entirely original! I can't even begin to describe how happy I was when I saw that. Also, I'm curious as to how this fits into the next part of your story :) The best thing about NextGen fics is that one can simply mold them to be whatever one wants them to be, as there is no precedent! Something you have done so very, very well.

Just one grammar issue that I caught.

"...and to protect the all those that are not in this room..." The placement of 'the' within the writing is a bit awkward.

Other than that, truly very fabulous :) Let me know in my thread when the next chapter is published!

Author's Response: Thanks! That is exactly why I am having so much fun doing this because with NextGen we are given so much freedom.

Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I rewrote that line several times and I guess the 'the' wasn't removed when I rewrote it the last time. I'll go fix that in a minute.

Thanks and I will be sure to let you know!

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