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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
I can't quite find the right word to describe this. Sweet seems to fluffy. Nice seems like I'm just on the fence about it. Amazing sounds like it was full of drama and twists and turns. It was ... different. Good different. Wonderful different. Marvellous different!

So many stories these days have such dramatic endings that by the end your just going, woah, slow down there a bit. All that happened in a day? In this, it happened over something like 60 years and it still didn't leave me feeling like I just ran a emotional marathon. It was great! It was like taking a breather. Also, the moral of it had a really good base in realism and real life. I could totally imagine this relationship happening (apart from the witch part, as much as I dream of Hogwarts).

The use of the repeated sections starters 'I first' really ties the whole story together. Sometimes stories like this jump all over the place and your doing your brain in going 'What?? Where am I??' But by using them it connects the parts so you can see the big picture and get some of that moral coming through (like a jigsaw puzzle!)

I would have liked to see a little more detail of their relationship after Hogwarts. You put so much detail into the Hogwarts years but after that it sort of fades away a little and moves on a little faster.

Over a really ... gaah I still can't think of the right word! Even after writing a whole review about it! Classic? Stoic? A Staple? Anyway, I every much enjoyed it. Hugs,

Nikki :)

Author's Response: Hello Nikki! :)

Awh, thank you! I think good different, wonderful different and marvellous different is very complimentary, so thanks! :P

I'm glad you like the repetitiveness! I started writing one paragraph, then thought the second paragraph would sound good if I started the same. Then, because I"m such a perfectionist, all the other paragraphs had to be the same :P

True though - in Hogwarts, I wrote every year, but after, I only did the main big things in someone's life. I'll look into that. I wonder what other major relationship stepping stones there are.. Never been in a relationship so I'll have a think ;)

Thanks Nikki! :)

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