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Review:LadyMalfoy23 says:
hehe this is adorable. I love how its not just some flashback that hermione is only remembering and rose has to listen. Never in a million years would i have thought to put a memory in a pensive to show a daughter! I really enjoyed this because yes i am a fan of Draco/hermione ship but i also enjoy it being in cannon as in her and Ron staying together. I believed much of what was wrote, i could imagine draco doing this all.

The flow and pacing of your story was truly remarkable it flowed perfectly right from present day to memory and the word choice seemed just descriptive enough! :) you characterization was spot on also, especially with ron he is one that i have a terrible time trying to write and finding a good portrayal of hiim. All in all congrats on this story. :)

Author's Response: thanks so much :D of all the characters i've written, ron has to be top three hardest to nail to canon... besides him are luna, dumbles, percy, and cho... ew cho... haha

but thanks so much for that great review... seeing as this was one of my first stories, it really made my day :D

~~sly~~


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