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Review:lia_2390 says:
Hi!

I haven't read a fic like this for a while, makes me sort of miss them. I think you've made a great start with this story. The first line alone drew me in to the mystery of it all and the ending was just as good! The setting of this story is something I also like...you've taken the characters away from dreary old England and most certainly out of Hogwarts.

At first I thought all of them were Muggles but then you introduced this book. I'm curious about this group of people now...the Legion. As for your characters, you've clearly made Aron one of your major characters. I rather like him and would love to see how you develop his story in the following chapters. To be honest, I'm a bit upset about Kara. (Aron had plans!)

Anyway, great start, Lee! Can't wait to see an update.

Lia

Author's Response: Hey Lia!

Thanks! And I am glad that I made you miss them :P oh yeah, none of this story is going to take place in England at all.

You'll find out more about the Legion later on but you were right in your first thought of them, they are all Muggles. ;) And yes, Aron will be coming back very soon. He is a major player in the story.

Thanks Lia and thanks for the lovely review!


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