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Review:TheProphecy says:

Well, what an opening! That was rather good.

From the first line you had the reader hooked. Which was brilliant and why you already have two favourites.

I loved how you held details back and that gave the story a rather mysterious air which i thought was fantastic and just what a prologue needs.

I liked Aron as a character, although of course i don't know much about him and if/when he appears again i would like to see lots of development of his character.

I also thought you had a brilliant ending to this chapter. You wrote well with no grammar mistakes that i could see and overall you should be proud of yourself. :)

I would also like to say that when you next update could you let me know and i will happily review the next chapter as well. unfortunately first chapters are the hardest to review so i wouldn't mind reviewing this with something a bit more substantial. That way i might be able to find something to give you advice on :)

Well done.

TheProphecy x

Author's Response: hi there!

wow! thank you!! and this reply is going to be short since everything you are saying is just making me blush! thank you. and I'll be sure to let you know when the next chapter is up!

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