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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
Oh Misty, I found this to be a lovely chapter! I was not disappointed by the reminders of Christmas trees!

Remus was standing beside what could possibly qualify as the most magnificent Christmas trees she had ever seen. -- I'm curious to know if you mean Christmas tree here because the setence slightly confuses me.

I loved the whole scene with them in the tower and where exactly Dollie went when she couldn't sleep. I would probably wander the halls of Hogwarts myself to try to find somewhere to spend my time, hopefully looking up at the stars. I love astronomy and am actually a huge dork about it, but I loved how you incoporated it!!!

And I loved Remus waking up Dollie. It was a bit funny to read about but very, very sweet. They were quite the funny pair especially as they put on their jumpers. I was curious as to where Dollie got her own jumper. And I loved the present exchange. It was no cliches like necklaces or even books...but a journal and gloves are still lovely gifts.

I'm excited to see if they have any more interactions over the break! I think it'd be fun to read about and see. I loved being able to catch up on this story, Misty. It reminded me of just how wonderful of an author you are!

I hope this story gets some more attention soon because it really is an excellent story and one that is super lovely to read about. You are a great author and totally deserve to have more attention brought back to this story!

Love you always,
Lindsey

Author's Response: Eep, that was a typo on my part. Fixed it though, thanks for pointing it out!

Same here! Though the prospect of running into Filch, Mrs. Norris and Peeves would probably scare me, just a tiny bit. I absolutely love stargazing myself, there's something so subtly beautiful and romantic about them, I just knew I had to include them somehow.

Hehehe, it was meant as a little throwback to the first sentence in the first chapter. Really? If you really want to know, her mum just bought it from some department store, since she can't sew or knit ^_^. Funny you should mention those two examples. I did briefly consider them (Sirius to Dollie a necklace & Dollie to Remus or Remus to Dollie a book) but as you pointed out, they are quite cliche. Plus, I thought of something even better. The journal, gloves and bracelet (that Sirius gave Dollie) ultimately figure into the plot later so look out for that. I'm glad you liked the choices!

Ah, I hope you didn't mind that I skipped the break (as you read in the next chapter). For one, I didn't want anymore filler (though I did have an idea for a snowball fight but ah well) and I was excited to get to meatier plot developments, which *fingers crossed* I hope you enjoy.

Aaaw Linds, I never know what to say when you shower me with all these praises, especially when I think you're being a bit too generous with them hehehe. But thank you so very much, it means the world that you think that highly of my writing and this story.

*Hugs*
Misty


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