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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
MISTY! Oh I had totally forgotten about the James and tutu scene! I love the Maraduers--creativity is too right about that. They are some funny guys with a real penchant for some good humor fun.

You did an amazing job coming up with their prank, well Sirius' prank. It was funny, amusing to read about, and unharmful. Its very difficult feat to achieve and you did it so well!

I loved the Dollie/Remus action going on in this chapter because they seemed so perfect for one another. The comfortable silence, the complimenting personalities, and the sweet shyness was a perfect young romance mix.

I also feel bad for Sirius though; its become clearer and clearer to the peanut gallery audience that his feelings aren't returned nearly as much. Dixie started with the intent of using him but its probably become clearer and clearer to her that Sirius is a lot more serious than she thought.

Your grammar and flow was amazing; you had no grammatical issues, no typos, no syntax errors. Your sentence structured was varied and approriate in the right places. You did an excellent job with the dialogue; it felt very natural and casual. It never felt forced or overly thought. You have done an excellent job with this chapter as well hunny!!

xx, Lindsey

Author's Response: Oh my, that scene has to be one of the (if not the most) silliest scenes I've ever written. Probably my earliest foray into humor, don't know how my twisted mind ever came up with that.

Maybe it's just me but over-the-top Marauder pranks are a bit hard to come by in fanfiction. But they really are a joy to write and it's always wonderful to hear when people point out that particular scene, since I've always felt my humor writing is a bit weak.

Hehehe, you'd think they were made for each other or something ;). Too bad there's a little obstacle that goes by the name of Sirius Black. The audience (and you) would be entirely correct. Sirius himself is completely oblivious though. He isn't much for taking the hint. It will hit Dollie pretty hard how much more there is to Sirius than she initially assumed.

*Squee!* What a relief! I can always rely on your sharp eye to spot any discrepancies or errors. Thank you for your incredibly kind words, darling!


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