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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:

Aghhh you do fluff SO. DARN. WELL. And you are always giving me a fluff master ^_^. I must have learned from you because the entire picnic was heart warming. I wish I had a Sirius or at least had the kind of guys who were morning people!

To start with the beginning of the chapter, Lily and Viv's dialogue while Dollie was still sleeping was excellent to read. It was quite humorous and I giggled to myself. I did feel bad that Dollie's lovely dream was interrupted though. Poor girl.

I really enjoyed the sunrise scene as well. It was sweet and endearing to read about; plus, I can only imagine how wonderful it'd be to watch the sunrise near Hogwarts. What an awesome thing to see!!

Your reaction of the girls to the new relationship was definitely believable and funny. I really liked Abs and Cass--they were so sweet to do that. Sue was a real character to read about as well; her forwardness was pretty silly! I loved your entire dialgoue and really enjoyed your plot development.

The forwardness of Sirius was totally believable because I could totally envision his attitude being like that. A Maraduer through and through wanting to jump in and just experience.


Author's Response: Please, you've got a PH.D in fluff, missy. If anything, I probably picked up a few tricks from you ;D. I don't, I like my sleep thanks. Sirius is like a little energizer bunny or something, don't know where he gets all that energy.

They meant well, really. How else were they going to get rid of that owl? Dollie does seem to have bad luck, doesn't she? But she did get a nice little picnic for it so it wasn't all bad. ;)

I know exactly what you mean! I'm too much of a night owl to ever catch a sunrise (living in the suburbs doesn't help much). I've only ever seen one sunrise and believe me, it was gorgeous. I based the scene on that one real-life experience.

Girls can be incredibly catty when they want to be but a select few are able to rise above, the examples being Abs and Cass. Oh gosh, Sue is a piece of work isn't she? She's supposed to be a parody of Mary-Sue and Paris Hilton, her very name being a homage to that ;).

As always, I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and that everything is believeable. Believeability is one of the best compliments you can give me because it's what I strive for in my writing. Thank you so much!!


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