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Review:The Captain says:
Yay for a comedy! You have no idea how excited I was when I read your summary. Comedy and stalkers? Stalkers make me disturbingly happy. It's about time someone found Scorpius creepy! Anyways, I think your plot is brilliant. It's certainly not your average Scorpius/Rose story. It's nice to see a story where they've graduated and aren't already married/madly in love/have 20 kids.
"I didn't know where he learned his moves from, but I sincerely doubted they had ever got married and would die lonely and unloved by many. I predicted he would meet the same end. Justice." Maybe it's just because I'm tired and a little wonky (I just type lootle. And then I made lootle into tootle...) Anyways, I'm not in top editing mode, but I found the phrasing of this slightly off. I know what you were trying to say, but it sounds like Rose thinks that Scorpius' moves are never going to get married, not the person/wild animal that he learned them from.
Other than that, I loved it and I'm off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha! I think Scorpius is bound to be creepy with his genes. Draco was never a cool guy, no matter how many people write him as a love machine. Nah, Scorpius is pretty awkward.

thank you so much for the awesome review :D

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