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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:

Aw poor Sirius :(. He didn't know about her fear of heights! But still, poor Dollie, too, and stupid, immature fifteen year old James for catalising it all! I really enjoyed the build up to the date and the way you incoporated the fan girls.

James' interaction and the fan girls definitely made for amazing reading and some giggles. I think you do a really good job reminding the reader that James was not always the endearing and somewhat mature man we assume him to be once he and Lily married. There was once a Maraduer that insulted Snape, that had a big ego, but was still the amazing friend and supportive brother figure for others. You create the dynamic character that is a joy to read.

You do a really good job of making the plot interesting and totally believable. I love the excitement and pushing Dottie that Vivian did. Vivian was a very sweet reminscint of a friend I think we all have. She is the friend that is always excited and supportive of what her friends are doing.

I really loved this chapter because you made a very typical 15 year old date with such diastrous results for a date. I really enjoyed it even though I felt so horrible for Dollie.

Lindsey xx


Sorry, that was mostly your fault, for making me giddy with all these wonderful reviews. But I'm not complaining at all. ;)

I do give Sirius a rough time, don't I? Same goes for Dollie but hey, she's got two studs who love her so she shouldn't complain too much, hehehe.

Ergh, James is a bit of a jerk in this story. After all, this story does take place in the year he humiliated Snape and played a strong part in destroying Lily and Snape's friendship. You've hit the nail on his character. He had his good and awful character traits but did eventually redeem himself somewhat. I'm so happy you liked what I did to his character. Oh, and this isn't the last you'll see of the fangirls. They'll make their presence felt in much, much later chapters. I'm aiming for just before OWLs start for them to make their reappearance and do some serious damage.

Vivian was inspired by my high-school best friend so she does feel very real to me, even if I do sometimes make her over-the-top. At the end of the day, as boy-crazy as she is, she cares deeply about her friends.

I am quite partial to this chapter, if I do say so myself hehe. Action-packed scenes are always a treat I enjoy giving to readers. Thank you so much, Lindsey.


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