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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
This is a cute little one shot. It was well written and flowed fairly well through the story. I would avoid putting 'Hermione's POV' etc through the story though as they detract from in and break the flow up. The same thing can be down with a break line of some sort like a few stars. Your writing is good enough that it will immediately become apparent that the POV has changed.

Naturally, it is totally OOC for Hermione and Draco, but only because there is no back story or anything to it. But if you ignore the pairing, it is very sweet and i totally enjoyed it. And anyway, there is nothing wring with OOC character Dramione every so often. Well done on a nicely written and sweet story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)

Yes, I've read about how this breaks up the flow of the story so I think I'll use your idea of putting asterisks instead :) And I know how OOC this pairing is but I think I just wanted to write something sweet and fluffy at the time :)

Thanks again!
Sophia x

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