Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
Aaw! This is such a sad story, and it goes beautifully with Eponine's song. I love Les Mis so much, it was such a great choice and it complemented your story really well. Overall, the writing was good! You tend to overuse '...', so maybe replace them with a comma or a colon or a semi-colon. It's not particularly bad, it's just when I see things like that it sometime disrupts the flow of the story and I think flow is the most important thing, especially in one-shots were you have to make an impact really quickly. You had very good characterisations. Ginny's emotions were portrayed particularly well I think and that was where you strongest writing was. Harry was very wise, almost Dumbledore-esque! A lovely one-shot, well done!

Author's Response: I love Les Mis as well, and especially this song. This was the first story I wrote and I have improved so much. I will read back over it and fix all the '...' and such. I don't use them at all any more. I'm glad you like the characters. I wanted Harry to appear rather grown up. In many ways, he is acting like the voice of reason in Ginny's head.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 754
Submit Report: