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Review:Erised says:
This chapter is probably the funniest so far! Rose describing herself as looking like a llama in the morning made me crack up. And the hair all over Molly's face, and the betting on when Scorpius would arrive at Rose's work. And that was just in the first few paragraphs. AMAZEBALLS.

One tiny criticism - I feel as if some of the narrative was a little too in-depth at times. Example: when Rose was making a cup of tea in the shop, the narrative is almost describing the exact way she made her tea, what she did with the tea bag, etc. It wasn't detrimental to the plot or anything, it was just a tiny bit tedious. Don't hate me :(

More compliments now to make up for it. Teddy in this is just so NICE - the archetype gorgeous guy. I loved the description of his oice being like liquid chocolate, I thought it was very effective. You may just be convincing me of his amazingness - still a work in progress, but still, he's rather dreamy in this.

Oh, and - MORE SAUSAGE ROLLS NEEDED. This is an order ;)

LAV YA EVEN MORE THAN LAST TIME :D

Author's Response: Jenny!!! I adore you :D this review is extra special because it comes from you :)

Ah, you've found my trick - make parts of it really dull and then people think the rest is great :P haha, kidding. I'll sort it out -salutes-

LOVE YOU!

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