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Review:The Captain says:
First of all, the description James' special place made me think of Avatar. Anyways...
"Shit, I feel like I was meant to get the new nimbus 3000 but all I got was a comet 480." This line brought a huge smile to my face.
You've still got some grammatic errors, specifically with punctuation and to/too/two. Your characterization and plot are coming along nicely though! I love the idea of the Hufflepuffs standing up for themselves. I do love Hufflepuffs, and they never receive enough credit.
I also loved the Hufflepuff girls' conversation at the end of the chapter about who to hex. It came off very realistic, and funny.

Author's Response: Ha ha I kind of thought of something like that while I was trying to describe it, so glad you thought along the same lines. I will definitely try and re-work some of those gramma errors. Glad you enjoyed the conversation and that it came of realistic. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review:-D!!

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