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Review:DemetersChild says:
This was a really beautiful story. I had chills several times and I could really feel the pain that Ginny was going through. I know this song, too, so I knew more or less what was going to happen--that Harry wasn't really there. It was so sad to watch her believe she was talking to him when I knew she was only talking to herself.

The ending was really nice, having her realize that she had to live real life and not in a fantasy, that they would be together again one day.

The only thing I would suggest would be to get someone to read over it for grammatical errors. There are missing commas in the dialogue as well as several places where Harry's name isn't capitalized. It would just make for a cleaner story and better flow.

Beautiful story!

Magically Yours,

Dem

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your compliments. This was the first story I wrote and I've improved alot since then. It is probably time I read over it again to pick up all the errors now that I have an improved appreciation of grammar.

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