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Review:HannahJoyWeber says:
well done! you did a good job of introducing those characters, and you took my advice of changing them to some extent :) personnally, I don't think it's strange how del compares people to other things... I do it all the time (but maybe I'm 'special' too...) can't wait for the next chapter! sorry there's not much advice in this review, I'm waiting to see where you take this :) one thing is you used 'saw' instead of 'say' once.

Author's Response: Hey Hannah!

As lovetobeginny said, Del is unique! So you're not special, you're unique too (:

Thanks for reviewing. I think you may be my most comitted reviewer! (not that I have many).

Anyway, I'll be sure to fix that 'saw' mistake (thanks for pointing that out, btw). I'm writing the next chapter now, but it's hard from Del's point of view.

I'll finish it soon, hopefully.

xx - smashed_crayon


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