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Review:schoenemaedchen says:
Hi there! Back with another review.

I'm still so in love with the idea of this story! Such a lovely way to present James and Lily. So different and original. I already told you that, though :)

What really stood out to me in this chapter was how you're not just presenting different instances, it's how you're developing their characters along the way. You see the canon events developing. I love this! You do it subtly, but with great detail and importance.

My favorite part was that I swore I could smell violets as I read. Don't know why. Great quality writing! :)

Can't wait to read more.
-schoenemaedchen

Author's Response: Something happened... why did my replies disappear...

Anyway, second try.

You cannot believe how wide am I smiling at your review. :) I am so happy that you can see the canon Lily and James developing through these small 'snapshots'.

And wow - about the smell of violets. That's like the greatest compliment ever. :) I am glad you liked that part.

Thank you for the loveliest review!


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