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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
I really, really love this! You have such a good writing style, and I really like the childish/slightly immature thing you've got going on. I always find it really hard to write children dialogue/thoughts because you can either make them really... really annoying and squeaky (this doesn't really make sense) or too mature for their age. I reckon you've got the perfect here, so well done! And well done for using the 'where do babies come from?' bit, it fitted in so well with the plot and Severus and Lily getting married!

I liked the characterisations of all your characters... they fitted in so well with characters in the books and they were really believable. Well done!

I loved the ending. I like how Lily still has (some) feelings (not necessarily love) for Severus. I think that is probably more guilt about how she ended their friendship or whatever.

A great one-shot, well done! :D

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for the review.

It was, honestly, so much fun to write the dialogue for this story. I love the pure and honest words of children. They say the "darndest" things, you know.

I def. think Severus and Lily always had feelings for one another. Maybe they were stronger at one point, but I don't think Lily ever forgot and I'm sure she loved Severus for watching out for Harry, even from the grave. Just not the same kind of love that she had for James. They were two very different people.

Thanks again!

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