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Review:The Captain says:
Love the cliffhanger at the end! This is actually the first story I've read that has focused on the Minister and his family, surprisingly. I mean, there are so many movies and tv shows about this sort of thing, but yours is the first fan fiction I've read, so I commend you on your uniqueness.
Great first chapter! We're introduced to the characters, and the setting, while still having a little bit of drama, and a lot of promise. You still managed to fit in a bit of characterization, and I'm sure we'll see more later. Specifically, I'd like to learn more about Callum. Who exactly is he? What's his plan once he actually does take over the Ministry? Why does he want to do this? Did Liam Frost know he was being backed by such a sinister character? And finally, how exactly did the plan to rig the election fail?

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, it really made my day. I'm not sure if there is anything out there on the Minister either, this just came to me one day, and hey, when the idea comes, you have to write.

Yes, Callum and his agenda is so far a mystery, I want to unravel him slowly. I've left a lot of unknowns about him to entice interest and heighten the mystery. I do, thankfully, know all the answers to the questions you asked and as the story unfolds so will the answers.

Thanks again, it's a relief to know that I am on the right track. The first chapter is so important.


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