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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Hiya! This one-shot was adorable. :)) I really like the idea how you based the one-shot around the sorting of Albus. And the way you wrote it certainly makes sense why he was put in Gryffindor. :))

Scorpius and Rose were also adorable. I like the contrast between Scorp and his father - that he was a quiet one, reading his book alone, because no one liked the Malfoy family anymore. I am a fan of stories where Scorpius is very different from his father, because in my mind that's how it is. xD

Otherwise, it was generally well-written and enjoyable. I am glad I came to read it because of the (uh... snowball) fight. Cheers! :)

P.S. Almost forgot - I love the bits with mean James. xD He made me smile like crazy.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing! :)

I'm glad you liked my choices for the characters personalities. I don't think Scorpius should be like his father at all. I'd like to think that after the war, relationships between families improved. :)

I think James acted in a typical big brother way - winding his brother up all the time :D

Thanks again! I'm loving the so-called snowball fight at the moment :P

Sophia x

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