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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
Orderofthephoenix here from the Claws review thread :)

Oh, this is a beautiful story with so much feeling in it. I just went 'aw' all through the story until the last paragraph. It's so sad how this pair didn't work out and I love how you used the child-like wedding to demonstrate just how close Severus and Lily used to be.

Petunia's reaction to their wedding was just as I would have imagined - wary and dismissive, and you portrayed Severus' brutal home life well. Lily was sweet and innocent and I could understand why she reacted as she did when Severus didn't meet up with her.

That was a nice but sad touch at the end when you revealed it was a dream of Lily's when she's all grown up, married (for real) and has a baby.

Spelling and grammar was brilliant and there's nothing I'd change in this story :)

Well done, I loved this fic :D

Sophia x

Author's Response: Hi!

Thanks for reviewing :) I was secretly hoping somebody would review this story.

I appreciate the compliments and that you took time for the sake of the claws!!

See you around!

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