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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I loved this so much, I'm adding it to my favorites. Severus is such a great character - my favorite character in the books aside from Harry - and usually he's portrayed very negatively. I just adore everything about this story, from the cute playground wedding that made me feel eight years old again (I got married with dandelion stem rings once), to Petunia's impatience, Severus's intensity, and Lily's innocence, to her sitting in the rain waiting for him... It was very symbolic and you wrote it well. Your writing style is magnificent.

The only flaw I caught was this line:

He had let Lily down and he could only hope that he didn't hate her for it.

Don't you mean 'hope that she didn't hate him for it'? :) Anyway, this was a lovely read.

~ Toujours Padfoot

Author's Response: Hey there!

Thanks so much reading and reviewing.

This story took me WAY back as well. I also had a moment on the playground--with the "bad" boy to boot!

I don't think Severus is a bad person! I think he had a very hard childhood and is an extremely complicated character. People often see the surface and label him as "evil", but I think he's actually extremely vulnerable--especially as a child.

As for the flawed line, you're totally right, actually not the first person to catch it. I do have to go in and tweak that! Better get around to it soon. The queue is so long currently...haha.

Again, thanks so much for the review. Appreciate it!

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