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Review:liza_potter says:
Hello hello!

I really enjoyed this. I know you said your muse has been all over the place, but I hope you continue this story.

Dominique's characterization was interesting. Usually, she's portrayed as being more bold than Victoire; often sarcastic, cynical and violent. To see her as this dreamer type of person was different. I noticed how you're very fond of making some of the Next Gen girls very whimsical and faerie-like. Actually, I remember you usually made Victoire as such (on your old account, I mean). Seeing a whimsical Dominique was quite a surprise for me! Hehe. Still, it's working out great so far.

Another thing I really enjoyed was Dom's relationship with Rose. I've read so many stories where all the Weasleys and Potters get along so brilliantly. In a family as large and as loud as the Weasleys, I don't think that would be possible. In any family, personalities are bound to clash. At the same time, you didn't go overboard, either. Some stories have the Weasley cousins completely detesting each other. But as Dom said, Rose is her cousin and she doesn't want to hurt her. Good job there!

I really can't wait to see where this goes. This is such an intriguing premise and I'm excited to see where the story will take me.

Good job!

Author's Response: Hello there!

I actually have more of this written, and I hope to post it up soon. It's just on my other computer which I don't have access to, at the moment. However, I'm glad that you've enjoyed this thus far.

I'm glad you've found Dominique's characterization interesting. I am guilty of usually making her bold and cynical, myself, but I wanted to make her with more of a dreamy quality this time.

Yes, I probably will make more dreamy Victorie stories at some point. XD

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and didn't think it was too over the top. I do think that there would be arguments, sometimes, but I don't think they would really hate each other - especially with no good reason, like they seem to in some fanfictions.

Thank you for all your praise! I'm not sure I deserve it, but thank you all the same.

I hope you continue to enjoy this when I post more of this story!

♥
linders

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