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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi, RandomRed here from the forums. I am amazingly late but I am here now with a review for you!

I am going to start with the end because it is awesome. So, so creepy but at the same time genius. Haunting, truly haunting. You can hear her in you mind just repeating that over and over in her cell.

The story itself is very well done as well. I like her character Slytherin but not deatheater, kill every muggleborn that walks, Slytherin. Which I find is a good balance.

Well her husband obviously drunk the kool aid.

I don't really know what to say the ending is still on my mind, it is an amazing end to a one-shot.

Your writing flows very well and nothing seems stinted, which is good seeing as you involved flashbacks. The transition (sp?) between each one is very well done. :)

Haunting ending!!

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: Hi!

My author's response is amazingly late, so that's alright.

The end was a bit of inspiration from the whole idea of insanity. I just started thinking of people and what they would be like after a couple months (or years) in Azkaban, and arrived at the conclusion that they must be constantly reliving the bad moments of their life!

I didn't incorporate that part into her character until I realized that I needed some conflict between her and Eli. I definitely did not want cheating, because I just find that overused and have used it multiple times in the past. So, the only other thing I could think of was a difference in belief.

"drunk the kool aid"? I'm confused, but that's alright!

I was so worried about the transitions! I was really worried that they'd come off choppy, but I'm glad that they were "well done."

Thank you so much for the review!

from,
Liberty

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