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Review:LadyMalfoy23 says:
Hello,
LadyMalfoy23 here with the review you requested! And just to start it out i want to say thank you for requesting this one! :) I have been hoping to find some great slash one shots, but they are impossible to find. Now on to the initial review.

I loved the plot line, at first when you talked about them being at a muggle bar i was curious to see where this goes, but i was really glad that you explained earlier about them venturing into the muggle world for a slight escape from the war.
Sirius, is very well writen here, i find that he is diffucult for me to write but then i find stories like this and they make it seem easy. I can see him drinking like that when he was just out of hogwarts and i can see him being VERY impatient because that is how he is in Ootp. But what really got me into noticing you nailed the characterization was his anger, his sorrow, and his view on living life on impulse. Very nicely done.
Remus, I was almost possative that is who you were talking about at the beginning but wasnt totally 100%sure untill when he came over to him. Remus' character to was very well written. You were spot on when it came to his sweet side (with Dorcus), his over analizing life and not living on impulse, his slight anger outburst and i loved when he finally kissed Sirius, that was very well executed. All in all I really enjoyed this story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for coming by. I know what you mean, there isn't much slash amidst all the ScoRose and Dramiones here. Lol.

I'm with you, Sirius is a hard character to shape. I'm so glad that you found him to be on the mark. :D Remus too, thank you so much.

This review certainly made my day, thank you again. :) --Jenna

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