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Review:Melizzle says:
Hey!
It's Melizzle from the forums. I'm so sorry it's taken me forever and ever to get to your story - I've been super busy lately. I'm here now, though!!

I'd like to start off with the fact that I'm slightly confused, but I absolutely love this first chapter. You describe things very well and I really like that - I'm a sucker for adjectives and you used a bunch, especially in the very beginning. I could picture it all in my mind very well.

I didn't see anything wrong with this chapter, grammar wise. I didn't notice any punctuation errors, either, or spelling errors. So excellent job on that part!

It's a bit mysterious, but I like that about it. And I like how delirious the character truly is. Really, I just like the entire thing, haha. :P

Great job, really!
Melizzle [10/10]

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm also sorry for getting back so late. Finals came around and HPFF took the back seat... but thank you!

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