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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi, here with your requested review :)

I always feel Dramione's are just too OOC (hence why I said I'm usually harsher on them!) but the fact you actually mentioned this in Hermione's thinking made me relax a little. The drinking itself would be a little OOC for Hermione as well, but again you explained this so that it seemed completely plausible. I commend you for that.

The intimate scenes were written really well; they were sultry, sexy and yet tasteful. I don't know if Draco would be quite that well informed in this area but it made for enjoyable reading! haha.

As for the technical side of things -- all spelling and grammar seemed fine, I noticed a few mistakes but they were certainly not enough to distract from the actual plot. And the flow and pace set the mood for the story perfectly actually.

:)

Author's Response: Thank You for reviewing :)

It's so hard to write a Dramione without them being OOC, that's why I tried to justify the things that they did that were OOC. I'm glad that you think they seemed plausible as that was what I was searching for.

I know what you mean about Draco, could he really be that seductive? Haha, as you can tell I always like to think so.

I'm thinking of getting a beta for my future stories so those little mistakes shouldn't occur again. I'm glad that they didn't distract you though :)

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