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Review:Alonia187 says:
okay you have got me interested in this fanfic of yours. It's well written but I really don't like how it's broken up by the line deviders. (Just one of my pet peeves of Fanfictions, no offence.)

It's a really well written story, however I don't think that Harry, Ron or Ginny would ignore something like this. It's just not in their nature to do so. I am not being harsh or mean, just stating facts. I am sorry if I did offend you.

Not many fanfics are like this, where Yes Hogwarts is the perfect place for the characters to be and live however, it gets rather Boring reading the same plot, the same thing over and over and over again. I'm not saying that your fanfic is like that, it's just that I have noticed an awful lot that most of the fanfics are like that. Where Hermione and everyone else are going back to school Whoop DE Doo. I know people can use their brains to come up with something creative. I've done it ;).

Sorry for me ranting like this, just that it's getting boring with the stories. Whatever happened to the fanfics that were of Veelas? Or that of Powerful dark romantic spells that bind the two characters together NO-MATTER-WHAT? Marriage Laws? Element Stories; where the characters have Earth, Wind, Fire, and Water within them. At times I miss people who think outside of the box. Anyway, love it hon, please update soon!

Alonia187.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I have to agree with you that there are a lot of happy go lucky Hogwarts stories with similar plots (A New Lie my other story being one of them) and I would like to see an exciting new plot show up.

You do not know how much it means to me that you see that I am trying to make Hogwarts more than just a school where enemies fall in love. I'm not offended at all. This story doesn't exactly follow the books. Harry, Ron and Ginny have never been super close to Hermione and she is just now realizing this. The next chapter will be coming as soon as it's edited. Thanks again for your review!

~Danceinggirl109


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