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Review:lia_2390 says:
Oh wow. I loved this chapter. And holy crap...Kevin!

Your characterisation of Draco is something that continues to amaze me. When it comes to talking about his family or his past, it seems so very casual and light...too light, indicating it's a place where he doesn't want to go but happens to come up anyway.

His relationship with Pansy is like no other. He can read her so well, shoot, I actually believed her but when I went back to read it over, I laughed at myself just a little bit.

My goodness, this plot just keeps getting better and better. I really like that you've delved into the darkness and perhaps shown a more realistic side than what we're used to.

I can't wait for Scene Five!!

Lia :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I know, poor Kevin. But actually he wasn't such a good guy.

Having Draco be this kind of emotionally suppressed guy isn't a new thing, but it works so well with the character role I am filling with him. The thing I love about these old noir stories are that the men are so definitively men, and the women so definitively women. But they're both incredibly compelling characters in their own way, both strong. In Pansy's case, a little devious.

Thank you so much!

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